Final Project for Spring Term
Chelsea Simpson
Meehan
Final Writing Project
The Evolving Modern Day Frankenstein
Mary Shelly’s 1817 novel Frankenstein has many interpretations that have evolved in unison with technology. Though society has grown to see many film productions emerge over the years that are based on the original Frankenstein, adaptations of Frankenstein include a diverse spectrum of media. In Kenneth Branagh’s 1994 film titled, Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein, Branagh makes a statement by introducing a new theme of rebirth which diverts from the recreation theme seen in the novel. However, the hypertext Patchwork Girl, by Shelly Jackson, an adaptation of Frankenstein, there is a different underlying purpose as it introduces a new medium through which audiences can receive the story of Frankenstein. Jackson shows that there are different ways in which one can read. Instead of the traditional front to back reading with pages, Jackson uses a computer as the medium of delivery. Both Branagh and Jackson create personal twists off of the original work of Frankenstein with two different purposes for the reader/audience. Technology has enabled both Branagh and Shelley to recreate a more modern version of Frankenstein.
One of the first and most prominent scenes from Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein is the birthing scene when Caroline, Victor’s mother, is giving birth to Victor’s younger brother, William. This scene is not present in the original novel, but nonetheless as an addition it works to set the audience up for the theme of creation in the form of reproduction. In this bloody and somewhat frightening scene, Caroline appears to be bleeding to death in the room, while the few people in the room act frantically as Caroline screams in pain and horror. Although the baby lives, Caroline does not survive the act of giving birth to William.
When analyzing this scene, one may feel that Branagh is not only trying to make a statement that creation comes in the form of reproduction, but also that life and death go hand in hand. This pertains both to the film as well as the novel. The monster which Victor creates takes many lives that would not have been lost had he never been created. When reflecting on this novel, it appears that Caroline died from catching the scarlet fever from Elizabeth. Branagh must have felt this was an important scene as he added it into the film. This is an effective way of setting the audience up for the scenes to follow.
Technological advancements enabled Branagh to create a thrilling and suspenseful scene which shows the monster “being born.” The scene starts off with very loud intense music and Victor anxiously running around the laboratory. The background music proves to be an effective tool that one would miss out on in the book. The music can be perceived as having a purpose as it helps to lead the audience to idea of the process of birthing. Childbirth, especially in the time period when the novel was published, was considered to be quite dangerous. The loud music before the monster was born corresponds with the commotion and violence of birth scene. When the monster finally comes to life, the music gets louder and louder, almost like the rising cries right after a baby is born. The tub from which Victor pulls the monster can be perceived as a symbol for the womb, and the music completely shuts off. Silence takes over as the monster grasps for air. One could compare the silence to the moment a child is first born before they cry. Not only does the tone of the music indicate the monster’s creation, but the visuals in the scene help portray the process of natural reproduction. The film version adds an extra dimension to the story of Frankenstein that is absent in the pages of the original book.
I expected to hear music when I opened Patchwork Girl, as I thought it would be a blend between the traditional book and a film. Music may have been very effective in transforming the reader into the storyline, but Jackson found other ways in which to engage the reader. Although it did not have music, it used an unorthodox plot line to challenge the reader’s mind, which allows the reader to participate interactively in the story. This dimension allows the reader to become more engaged and focused. Patchwork Girl, requires an initial process of downloading the text to a computer before it could be read. When it opens on the screen, the reader may expect to hear music and see the presence of page numbers. Instead, the computer screen confronts one with a picture of a woman. After clicking on it the woman it forwards the page to what appears to be the title page. Initially overwhelming was the fact that the work has no set direction or path in which to read. Readers click on what interests them and keep choosing their own paths as the story progresses. After a bit of exploring Patchwork Girl, the story map comes to the screen. It appears in the form of a web, giving a visual depiction of the different paths in novel. This seems odd as the book does not have a set direction and is also quite hard to determine if there is a beginning. After completion of the reading it can be concluded that Patchwork Girl has neither beginning nor end to they story. This leads me to believe that Patchwork Girl challenges the reader’s mind in different ways: it makes you put the pieces together and use your imagination to an extent that the traditional book would not.
In the Film Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein, Branagh’s purpose is to introduce a new theme distinct from that of the novel. Whereas Shelley Jackson’s purpose for Patchwork Girl was to create a piece that challenges the mind to a new extent. Still, one may wonder what kind of the statement they are trying to make? First, look to where creation is portrayed as a process of birth. Branagh could potentially have highlighted natural reproduction because he wanted to take a stance and make a strong point of anti-feminism in the film. Looking back on the film, because of the suggested process of creation in the form of birth, one could relate this to a woman’s “job.” For the creation of the monster, one may wonder if he is making a statement that women are incapable of creating life that is perfect. Feminism prevails in both the film as well as the novel as the significant underlying theme. Branagh may have wanted to show that reproduction, a woman’s job will, never be perfect. However, in the hypertext Patchwork Girl, Jackson’s purpose was challenge the reader’s mind. But what is her statement in doing this? I believe that she wants to show that as technology advances the mind can as well, and introducing hypertext is a new an innovative way to read and challenge the mind. Instead of having a set path or direction, Patchwork Girl allows the reader freedom to choose what they want to read and when they want to do so. Every time that I opened Patchwork Girl I was challenged. I found that when reading I would often find something new and have to go back and “piece” the story together, kind of like patchwork. As technology progresses it would not be surprising to see more hypertext works available to the people. Hypertext may only be the beginning of a media revolution in novels and other written works.
Kenneth Branagh’s film production and Shelley Jackson’s hypertext are two prime examples of how technology has an influence on the way we perceive works of literature. Some may try to argue the fact that technology is negatively impacting our society as a whole – that we depend too heavily upon it. Take for example, Sven Birkerts, the author of The Gutenberg Elegies. He believes that society is living in too much of an electronic culture which is having a negative effect on out literary world. Birkerts points out that technology is influencing printed works, but in reality it is the print that is influencing technology. Films like the one mentioned would not have been made had their not been a literary work before it from which to build upon. Patchwork Girl may never have been produced had the original Frankenstein book never been published.
Technology is ever changing and there are certain aspects of it that may take away from the literary world of yesterday. But books and written works need to correspond with changing technology if they wish to continue to be a part of this evolving world of today. The human race has always been an innovative one, books have already evolved through so much, through the copying of books by monks, to changes acquired by the invention of the printing press, to today’s mass production of books in factories. Technology has brought written works that far and it seems that it will continue to influence the way in which we perceive them.
Reflection:
When I first started thinking about the final project, I honestly had no idea what I was going to write about. I kept going back to my four writing projects that I had completed over this semester and thinking how can I construct them into better essays. I also went back and looked at the suggestions Professor Meehan gave me which I found to be very helpful. He pointed out key points and new ideas on how to develop a stronger and more thorough essay. I finally, decided to go back to my third writing project and expand on it. This was one of my more recent project and it was sill fairly fresh in my mind. I had a lot of new ideas to bring into the paper to after reading the hypertext Patchwork Girl. I also incorporated parts of my last essay into this final project as well. I like the fact that both Patchwork Girl and Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein are two new media which are based around the original novelFrankenstein. I began to make a connection between technology and print material and how a writer can convey a certain message.
In this final project I wanted to analyze the authors purpose of creating a different medium other than print in order to tell a modern day Frankenstein. This writing project was very challenging because I had to not only revise an essay but further my thinking and reading. With this final project, I attempted to combine two essay and construct them into even stronger pieces of writing. I also expanded on Birkerts and Jackson purpose on taking the original Frankenstein and put it into a new medium. I think that this essay turned out very well and one can see an improvement from my first essay to this last final project, which was one of my major goals for this semester.
After this final writing project, I feel very confident and positive that my writing has improved since the beginning of the fall semester. This final project made me go back and re-read my writing projects and I could tell my writing has improved with each essay. I think that this English class has guided me and helped me tackle some problems I had when writing a paper. Two major points of emphasis that I tried to improve on this semester was the flow of my writing and building a strong thesis. I noticed that in my first essay my thesis was somewhat unclear and I feel like the flow caused the reader to have some questions; though looking back on my last writing project I think I had a strong interesting thesis and the paper flowed nicely. Overall I really enjoyed this course which has made me look at influence of technology on the print world. I hope to only become a stronger writer and take what I have learned in this class and use it in other classes and writing assignments.








